New York

Dear Ernest,
I'm writing this letter because I know that you will soon go on holidays. I want to recommend a place where I went last year: New York. For me these holidays were impressive because there I met one of my best friends.
New York people are quiet different if you go to Brounx or 5th avenue. In the first place people are rather poor, violent and addicted to drugs, whereas in the second place people are rich and polite.
In New York, you could go to central park. This is a particularly big and Pretty park. Also, you could go  to 5th Avenue, the richer New York area.
But if you prefer emotions, you could go to empire state and liberty statue. In a both places there are impressive views.

One more thing, if you go in summer, you must bring a swimsuit and a towel because in New York there is an enormous beach.
Finally I say that it is better to go in New York with friends than with your girlfriend.
Keep in touch,
Jepi

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